funymony's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Motherboard City]

Fun. Looks like a pattern from a 90's PC game or something drawn by A.I.

Belthagor responds:

"my own feeling is that we will have almost no communication with super intelligent computers because the nature of what they're thinking about will be completely foreign to us"

[In Flames]

WWOOOOAAAHH! That's AWESOME! Even better in full screen. <: Great job!

HezaKey responds:

Thank you! This is a very special piece to me. :3

[Claw]

What a fun pose! Feels dynamic!

The hand on the right threw me off a bit. It took me a second to realize she's clawing at a wall. I couldn't tell because the streaks aren't uniform and they make it look like she's swinging her hand in the air instead of clawing something flat and solid.

I like the clothing and the sandals! Great job!

Candlebites responds:

You were right the first time about the streaks being across the air, shrugs I like bizarre things
anyway thanks~

[A Devoured World]

This is cool! I like the otherworldly vibe! The glow on the water makes it look like a hot spring.

I agree with the comment about the background being a little flat.
You could add some depth by saturating and darkening the rock in the foreground.
If you fade some tentacles into the atmosphere they'll look a bit more distant.
Other than that this picture is golden.

Also, I can't tell if he's supposed to be staring at an ocean or if he's on a floating island.
If it's an ocean, I think it'd help if the water was to his eye level since that'd be the horizon line.

I took these suggestions and mocked it up out of curiosity. I think it helps, but you be the judge.
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/b12f68c08db50bf39a08686400e22fe6

Hope to see more work from you! :D

Candlebites responds:

Thanks, I intended it to be that- shes standing in a spring, but the darker part shes looking at is another world-
And as for the mock up, yeah having the water line up there does seem a bit better-
though I don't have the source files on this pc- (just the png)
so I can't work on this drawing anymore,

[Cover - Rings Of Tinuris]

Great work on the cover, but the text makes everything so unbalanced.

The streak across the picture is the same color as the logo and makes it hard to read.

The text on the right could be placed comfortably in the empty space above it instead of crammed into a crevice.

The contradicting list on the top left is so long that it feels confusing instead of clever- and it cuts into your subject. You could get away with "Demon. Angel. Heartbreaker." "Don't worry, she's your guardian star."

I can't tell if this is a parody or you're making a Mary Sue comic. Regardless, the drawing itself is neat and you can never go wrong with those pink and blues. Good luck!

ShaozChampion responds:

thanks

[Pastel Portrait]

Good portrait. Very light, soft, and easy on the eyes. I hope you throw down some more drawings.

JWKLvstheUniverse responds:

Thanks for the feedback! and I've posted more art on my Twitter and Instagram for a while, so I have a small backlog of stuff I wanna post in small portions here soon, lol

[it me]

Great linework! Fun hair style! I dig that swoosh on the front.

If this depiction of you is 100% accurate, you gotta tell me where you buy your bread shoes.
Also, why are your hands stuffed into your pockets?! WHAT ARE YOU HIDING FROM US!? >8(

webbins2D responds:

you've caught me. they're not shoes. my feet are made of literal loaves of bread. my hands are in my pockets because, as you may have guessed, they are also made of bread.

(ty for the kind words lol)

[Halloween Connverse]

Cute! Great job nailing down the characters! It looks very polished but the crayon texture on your linework makes it looks unfinished. I love the shading, it's spot on but it's hard to appreciate with extremely muted base colors. I bumped up the saturation in Clip Studio out of curiousity and I think it really helps the picture. Don't forget to sign your work! <: Great job! Hope to see more!!!

le-catty-cat responds:

Thank you! I think ill keep the rough lines, i like to use it for painted drawings to give it look a little more. And i did mess around a bit with the colors, but it didnt occur to me to bump up the saturation. Ill keep that in mind for next time!

[Bowsette]

You just gonna bless us with ONE picture and take off!?

Hope you post more of your awesome work. Great lines, color, and structure!
Busty but believable with how everything is pushed into the suit.

Sannyf responds:

oh there is allot more coming, along with a alternative of this.

[Dream friends wave 3!]

I like this, they're really simple but you've got a lot of pattern, shapes, and color working very well for you.

Giganide responds:

Thanks again! I really enjoyed hand-picking colors for this piece!