funymony's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hitch Dreyse]

You do such a great job shaping out clothes with your color and shading. The rendering is realistic and it's so interesting to see a cartoon/anime character in such a painterly style. The muted colors make it feel like a time piece or an antique you'd hang over the fireplace. Great job!

[Hanji]

I like your palette on the shading.

[Warhammer titan]

NICE! I dig your work! You've got awesome values and a painterly style going on. Do you do a lot of painting outside of digital work? You've got great fundamentals.

[Claw]

What a fun pose! Feels dynamic!

The hand on the right threw me off a bit. It took me a second to realize she's clawing at a wall. I couldn't tell because the streaks aren't uniform and they make it look like she's swinging her hand in the air instead of clawing something flat and solid.

I like the clothing and the sandals! Great job!

Candlebites responds:

You were right the first time about the streaks being across the air, shrugs I like bizarre things
anyway thanks~

[A Devoured World]

This is cool! I like the otherworldly vibe! The glow on the water makes it look like a hot spring.

I agree with the comment about the background being a little flat.
You could add some depth by saturating and darkening the rock in the foreground.
If you fade some tentacles into the atmosphere they'll look a bit more distant.
Other than that this picture is golden.

Also, I can't tell if he's supposed to be staring at an ocean or if he's on a floating island.
If it's an ocean, I think it'd help if the water was to his eye level since that'd be the horizon line.

I took these suggestions and mocked it up out of curiosity. I think it helps, but you be the judge.
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/b12f68c08db50bf39a08686400e22fe6

Hope to see more work from you! :D

Candlebites responds:

Thanks, I intended it to be that- shes standing in a spring, but the darker part shes looking at is another world-
And as for the mock up, yeah having the water line up there does seem a bit better-
though I don't have the source files on this pc- (just the png)
so I can't work on this drawing anymore,

[Cover - Rings Of Tinuris]

Great work on the cover, but the text makes everything so unbalanced.

The streak across the picture is the same color as the logo and makes it hard to read.

The text on the right could be placed comfortably in the empty space above it instead of crammed into a crevice.

The contradicting list on the top left is so long that it feels confusing instead of clever- and it cuts into your subject. You could get away with "Demon. Angel. Heartbreaker." "Don't worry, she's your guardian star."

I can't tell if this is a parody or you're making a Mary Sue comic. Regardless, the drawing itself is neat and you can never go wrong with those pink and blues. Good luck!

ShaozChampion responds:

thanks

[[CM]-Emmy Profile Picture]

woaH! It's rendered in such a way that it looks dimensional but maintains its cartoony feel. So cool and trippy to look at! Awesome work!!

[Leap Stone]

WOW. What an interesting pose and angle to draw from. Same with the background!
I feel like this would of been difficult to pull off if you didn't have such great rendering.
It's REALLY awesome. There's so much to enjoy in the way you did the shading and lighting. Those nice thin crisp lines too! I love it all!

[Pastel Portrait]

Good portrait. Very light, soft, and easy on the eyes. I hope you throw down some more drawings.

JWKLvstheUniverse responds:

Thanks for the feedback! and I've posted more art on my Twitter and Instagram for a while, so I have a small backlog of stuff I wanna post in small portions here soon, lol

[it me]

Great linework! Fun hair style! I dig that swoosh on the front.

If this depiction of you is 100% accurate, you gotta tell me where you buy your bread shoes.
Also, why are your hands stuffed into your pockets?! WHAT ARE YOU HIDING FROM US!? >8(

webbins2D responds:

you've caught me. they're not shoes. my feet are made of literal loaves of bread. my hands are in my pockets because, as you may have guessed, they are also made of bread.

(ty for the kind words lol)